Meeting Ocean – Original Version

Today’s post is about Ocean! And will probably be the shortest of the posts covering the differences between the genies’ original introductions and the rewritten ones I ended up publishing.  Sapphire As mentioned in Rajan’s post, Ocean was originally...

Meeting Garan and Light – Original Version

I’ve got a lot to cover for this one! There are actually three versions of Ali meeting Garan and Light out in the world. There was the version I wrote a decade ago, when I first first wrote down the genie story, then when I revamped the whole story of The Genie...

Meeting Illan – The Original Version

I’ll start off this post by saying that in both the original and published versions of The Genie Whisperer, Tavor advocated for Ali stealing the rest of the McMichael genies after she came home with three of them. But in the original version, the first three...

Meeting Rajan – The Original Version

Like with Tavor, Ali met Rajan in the same location in both the original story I wrote a decade and go and the rewritten published version. Ali was always a nerdy museum lover, so their meeting place got to remain the same.  Ruby  But the original version had several...

Meeting Tavor – The Original Version

For Ali’s adventures with meeting each of the genies, there are a fair number of similarities between the original version I wrote over a decade ago and what I ended up publishing. Other than the original version being a rather poor attempt at writing since I was such...